Out in the Margins; Or, On the Genealogy of Book Reports

At 6:44pm on February 15, 2010, Doug Jones-Graham said…

Adam, for whatever reason I couldn't find your email. I hope this will suffice. I had a tough time finding constructive critiques for your genealogy draft because it is in excellent shape. I shouldn't be surprised that you've done a bangup job, but you have.

Here's the best I've got:

page 3, the ending line of the 2nd full paragraph (failing blows) -- while your meaning is clear, I get hung up on the syntax. Perhaps mess with your wording a bit. Also, as far as "press" goes, perhaps you could elaborate, either here or later, on what you think that portends for students.