Out in the Margins; Or, On the Genealogy of Book Reports

Tuesday, February 16, 2010


Great job! The intro was well thought out. Loved the Thoreau reference very much. Remember in EDUC340 when we both recited that quote from Walden? HA!

One thing I noticed that you might want to clarify just a bit is on page 2, second paragraph, line 3: "was one of five of the first letters of the alphabet." How about saying, "one of five of the first SIX letters of the alphabet." It's not a big deal, but I stumbled when reading it and actually counted the letters.

Other than that, I enjoyed reading what you wrote. You have a great style and manner with the written word. Way to go, buddy!

Jim

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