
Great job! The intro was well thought out. Loved the Thoreau reference very much. Remember in EDUC340 when we both recited that quote from Walden? HA!
One thing I noticed that you might want to clarify just a bit is on page 2, second paragraph, line 3: "was one of five of the first letters of the alphabet." How about saying, "one of five of the first SIX letters of the alphabet." It's not a big deal, but I stumbled when reading it and actually counted the letters.
Other than that, I enjoyed reading what you wrote. You have a great style and manner with the written word. Way to go, buddy!
Jim
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